Thinking of you...

Photography \ Figure | 05/13/08 @890 | PurpleMagnolia | critiques (14) | views (298)

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A portrait of my friend Anne.

Olympus Camedia E-20p,
Shutter speed 1/80,
Aperture value 2.8,
ISO 160

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Comments (14)

cupcake

05/14/08 @959

Good work.

cgaddict

05/14/08 @012

Very nice capture.

androx3k

05/14/08 @022

good portrait and mood

ARZILLIER66

05/14/08 @164

Nice capture, nice composition

moserArtist

05/14/08 @194

Her face looks a bit overexposed (on that one side; right for us).
Eyes could be slightly sharper.

The background looks a bit distracting.

Nice girl and pose otherwise.

elvenearth

05/14/08 @355

A thoughtful and deep feeling to her eyes and pose - effective.

Hysteria

05/14/08 @609

Nice portrait

Vasco

05/14/08 @647

I agree with Moser. Try to get it without the overexposure and a bit sharper and it will be a great portrait.

everseen

05/14/08 @726

Nice model and angle as already commented. Frame looks strange for me.

Madanapale

05/15/08 @045

Lovely model....very nice mood!
Carlos

Jacobine

05/15/08 @449

Nice portrait and great mood!
overexposure is allready mentioned

Aeth

05/15/08 @843

Overexposed... you know the drill.
You do have excellent tonality throughout the image, it really is a shame about the face.

edit:
One thing you could have done, you've shot in 2.8 and a shutter speed of 1/80, if you dropped the shutter speed a stop or two, you could have solved the problem.

purplerose

05/16/08 @015

Pretty nice portrait. Personality shines through.

A bit overexposed on the face and background.

Face could be sharper.

Background is a bit distracting.

Worth going back and doing a reshoot.

PurpleMagnolia

05/17/08 @881

Thanks a lot for your comments.
I will shoot the photo once again if I have the opportunity and I am grateful for your constructive criticism!
As soon as the new picture is ready, I will upload it new of course .
Thank you ,greetings PM

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